Feedback

We have started putting together all of our editing along with the song. We had done about 15 seconds, and showed Mrs Stone, below is the feedback that she has given us;

• On 'shit' she expects the main characters to be introduced.
• When Jack sings the first lot of lyrics, she thinks it's too long, and maybe we should introduce the other characters.
• She expects to see quick shots of the band, showing authenticity.
• Jack is the singer of the band, and the main person of the narrative and needs to sell the song as well as the band.