Friday 18 February 2011

Our Response to the Feedback

The feedback from our teacher was extremely helpful as it allowed us to realise that we need to follows the techniques of the indie/rock genre. However, saying this, we also wanted to break the conventions.

The beginning shot is of Jack's feet, which pans to Tom's feet and then tilts up Tom's body. We particularly like this shot as it's different and something that the audience don't expect to see, thus breaking the conventions of the genre.

We did agree that the shot of Jack singing the lyrics was too long, therefore we have changed it to show shots of the other band members.

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